Book one: the reject.

Sorry for the early release:



The reject
Chapter one: (to be named later)


I woke up on my living room couch, still wearing my clothes from the day before. I quickly changed into a gray t-shirt and jeans and went outside. After seeing how high the sun was, I ran inside. The clock said 11:23. I was late for the first day of my summer job!!!!! I was supposed to get to my new job as a lifeguard at 10:15!!!
It seemed like an easy job and it paid ten dollars an hour, seeing as bravo beach was so popular.
I left my home in lower Marquee row, using my car I got a month ago. It was used, but not too bad. I made it to bravo beach in seven minutes.
Then I realized something. My brother Doyle at my home before I left.
I decided he probably went with one of my parents to their work.
I got out of the car and ran to my lifeguard tower.
One of my friends in another tower gave me a disappointed look.
Most people knew I wasn’t good at much other than playing the bass. He was the one who tried to change me. He failed. And so I’m the reject I was meant to be: Wulf Aeroangel, age sixteen and three hundred- forty one days. Two weeks until my birthday.
The day went by, nothing even remotely interesting.
I made it home right after dinner, so I ate re-heated steak, and fell asleep, with my alarm set.
I woke up knowing it was Saturday, the most popular day at Bravo beach. I ate a breakfast of Chunky puffs and then drove back down to the beach. I got to my lifeguard tower in perfect time.
After an hour or so of watching the water, sand castles littered the beach, I realized my brother, Doyle, was working on a sand castle with a bunch of other kids on a sand castle a bit to the west of me. It looked a lot more like an enormous mass of sand. He looked at me, smiled, and then ran over.
“How’s it going?” I asked.
He climbed up the ladder into the tower,
“How did you get here?” I asked.
“Sapphire took me, she said she would be back soon.” Doyle answered.
“Ok, are you going to go swimming?” I asked.
“Yeah, I was just about to.” He said.
“Well, see you.” Doyle said, running towards the water.
After a short while, Sapphire’s car pulled up.
“Hi.” She said after coming over to the tower.

It's basically the sneek peek with more added on to the end.

How come nobodys responding in these forums or the ff forums, is my story bad?

I like it! I'm just waiting for the full chapter.

That is the full chapter.

xD Sorry, I got confused. Great chapter though!

The reject: Chapter 2: Sapphire

“Hi.” I said to my girlfriend of one year, Sapphire Sphinx.
“Good morning.” She chirped back.
“So you brought my brother here?”
“I thought he needed a day in the sun, he’s looking pale.” She laughed. “So how was your first day yesterday?”
“Tardy.” I answered.
“Again? You know that doesn’t make a good impression, right?” Sapphire said.
“Well Sooorry.”
“Haha, did you hear the news this morning??” Sapphire said.
“Yeah, some weird star out in space…”I answered.
“I heard about it too, I’m gonna see it through my telescope tonight!!” Doyle burst in.
“Ahem!” Sapphire said. “How long have you been listening?”
“Just long enough to know Wulf is failing again, nice job o responsible brother.” Doyle laughed.
“Put a sock in it.” I said and pushed him gently.
We all laughed at the same time. “Speaking of which, I have to get to my job too.”
“Oh that’s right, you’re in the K.N.D aren’t you??” Sapphire said.
“Yup!” Doyle said proudly. “I only have one birthday left until I’m decommissioned.” He went on, talking about some of his slightly brave moments and his “manly” age 12 self.
“Do you ever shut up?” I said to him.
“Yeah, as a matter of fact, I gotta go.” He said as a S.C.A.M.P.E.R landed by the shore.
“Wulf, shouldn’t you be worried as a lifeguard that a rocket ship landed on the beach?” Sapphire whispered.
“Well they aren’t hostile….. I don’t think.” I answered.
“Bye!!” Doyle shouted to us.
“See you later!” I said.
“Now we can talk without him blabbing in the way.” Sapphire said.
“Yup.” I answered.
For the rest of the day we talked away about all we could, and on my break we went swimming.
“I’m going home now” I said when my shift was over. And drove home in the evening dusk.
I walked inside and up the stairs into the hallway to my room when Doyle ran into me and pulled me into his room.
“Look through the telescope!!” Doyle said worriedly.
When I did I couldn’t believe what I saw…..

I'm not even gonna bother any more